Tuesday, 23 April 2013

Freer Practice-Walter Koh

The immense heat emitted from the sun hugged me tightly, refusing to let go. Even after taking a shower, it still clung onto me like how a baby would cling onto its parents. As the day drew to a close, the heat slowly backed a retreat, letting the coolness of the night overwhelm me.

3 comments:

  1. Nice way to describe the heat.

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  2. very good can really understand what the sun seams to you

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  3. Very nice flow and well done on stating the heat.

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