Tuesday, 23 April 2013

Personification: The dark - Pei Ling (:

The cold darkness haunts me wherever I go. I try to escape, but I can’t, it’s strong grip kept me in my place. It’s cold presence brushes past me. It crashes down on me every single day. I try to pick myself up and find light once again. I end up lose myself in its maze and it will follow me for the years to come.


  1. It engages the senses of the reader, and the reader can imagine what you are trying to show/ describe.