Tuesday, 23 April 2013

Personification: The dark - Pei Ling (:

The cold darkness haunts me wherever I go. I try to escape, but I can’t, it’s strong grip kept me in my place. It’s cold presence brushes past me. It crashes down on me every single day. I try to pick myself up and find light once again. I end up lose myself in its maze and it will follow me for the years to come.


2 comments:

  1. It engages the senses of the reader, and the reader can imagine what you are trying to show/ describe.

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