Tuesday, 23 April 2013

The Paper Plane

Object: Paper PlaneI threw my newest creation with full force into the air. It soared in the sky, going higher and higher. It swayed from side to side, playing in the wind. It dived towards the ground and somehow swooped up again. I chased after it but it swerved around, teasing me.

4 comments:

  1. I think that it is very imaginative, however I think it can be improved on.

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  2. I think that it is very good and you can also fix the planel

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    1. Good personification used* and do take not some words are not human-like qualities like 'swooped'

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